Wednesday, September 9, 2009

A Defiling Parody!

When he opens my lazy legs,
What does he see there?
Hunger?
Pouring his spittle into
My burning mouth,
What does he feel?
Lust?

Performing the auld motions
Of intimacy, what does he expect?
Passion?
And finally, cushioning his
Fall against my breasts,
What does he pull off?
Catharsis?

I moan too.
But what do I feign?
Ecstasy or hurt?
Oh, what a parody we
Make of the routine, and
Slander it more by calling,
“Love-Making!”

Now Playing:: Breathless...........................The Corrs

7 comments:

janani sampath said...

wow!......:).... love this one, too.. Deepika, don't mind me saying this.. I don't believe you are only 22 :)... if ur only 22, believe me u have an amazing thought process that is beyond your age and keep that up.. love ur writing...

Deepika said...

@ Janani

hey thanks for visiting this really old entry :)
And trust me dear I am 22 :)
your comments are really encouraging, shukriya kaise ada karun :)

Cheers!

janani sampath said...

oh of course I believe you :).. mujhe shukriya mat ada karo bhai..

iam glad i stumbled on ur blog and now Iam addicted to it...:)

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